Can you write an interesting setting description to match this picture.
I would like to see a variety of sentence openers, WOW adjectives and similies please.
Adam
26/11/2013 8:09am

Its a cold wintery place looking over a lake which is surrounded by snow and frost covered trees.The water has a mist hanging over it with the sun glittering through it.You can see the snowy hills at the back of the lake with the sun peaking over the top.You can see the frosted grass sticking up and the snow shines when the sun reflects off of it

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katiec
27/11/2013 12:01pm

I like your use of adjectives Adam and I like how you described the picture.

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Abbie
26/11/2013 9:18am

it's a very cold place with the lake in front of it. the trees are frosted like the ice on the ground and a shinning sun appearing in the background over the mountains high up in the wonderful sky. Frosted grass below the icy-cold trees. Who knows what it's actually like there? It's very intresting wouldn't you say so too!

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Grace
26/11/2013 9:29am

It looks like a very cold place on a river covered with snow and ice. You can see mountains in the background with glistening ice covering the top of them. There is a sheet of snow on the trees and bushes. However it looks like it could be sunset as you can see the warm sun beaming off the water forming a mist. It looks as cold as Antarctica.

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Emily
27/11/2013 11:45am

Grace I love your story I have a picture in my head of what it really looks like good work

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Zoe
26/11/2013 11:48am

It is a freezing winter morning the trees are frozen you can feel the cold wind blowing a cross your face. The sky is dark blue and is as cold as ice.The water looks cold and has a mist over it.There is giant hills across the lake with white bright snow on them.

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Katiec
27/11/2013 12:05pm

I like in your description you have described it like you were there and It was very interesting to read and I think you have used good adjectives.

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Grace
28/11/2013 12:20pm

I liked your description Zoe !

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Emily
27/11/2013 7:30am

This cold foggy picture looks like a wintery evening when the sun is setting the ice falling of the trees and misty mountains in the background mysterious clouds, it looks like an evil setting as if someone has took the picture from an evil castle!

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Grace
28/11/2013 12:19pm

I like how you said mysterious clouds you use a good use of adjectives.

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Mia
27/11/2013 9:17am

It was a arctic day the land was frozen and a rapid breeze was blowing through the air. The icy winds froze everyhing in their path.

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Sol
27/11/2013 9:54am

The sun is rising over the high mountains while the icy lake is glistening with the early morning sun which is reflecting off the mist rising off the lake. The branches are covered in a thick frost and cold snow. There isn't a cloud in the bright blue sky which could mean it is going to be a crisp winter’s day.

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Mason
27/11/2013 9:55am

It looks like a frozen , chilly place the trees are frozen like ice it's that cold you would get frost bite the second you came out of your house the sun looks bright so during the day it would just trickle down the tree and all will turn into water

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Jamie
27/11/2013 10:28am

It is a very chilly place and everything is frozen, there is a large frosted icy lake also in the distance the sun peers through a thick fog
surrounding the snow covered ground. In the back ground the mountains hide the rest of the snowy land!

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katiec
27/11/2013 11:54am

It looks like a freezing lake surrounded by trees that are covered in frost and ice there is also mist over the cold water. At the back if you look carefully you can see mountains covered in snow or ice. There is lots of grass covered in frost. There is also a little bit of sun shining but not a lot. The lake is wavy and it looks like it is very windy. There is also the shiny sun reflecting of the water in the lake.

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Xavier
27/11/2013 12:27pm

It is a snow glazed morning with ice frosted trees and shimmering water with thin ice sheets.The beautiful gleaming sun reflects and lights up even the darkest corners of the woods.

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Kelsey
28/11/2013 12:03am

It looks cold and wintery place the mist was coming of the water the forest looked damp and dark also the sun could not light up some of the forest

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Amy
28/11/2013 11:36am

It's a misty and cold place, it is as cold as the Antarctic, if it was not as cold and misty it would be quite a lovely place. When you go it will look like an igloo but with trees also much colder and bigger.

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Grace
28/11/2013 12:22pm

I like your description because you used good describing words !

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